Nameless emo poem
February 4th 2008 by nuk in emo poems Please call me names
so i know I’m not nameless
Please hate me
so i know I’m not invisible
Please cut me
so i wont feel numb
and to feel that I’ve lived
let me do that one myself
please. -emma
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I like it. it really makes you think about how you need other people to HELP you survive, but wanting to and actually surving is up to you. for a name possibly: Please(but thats kind of corny) Help Me could be a good. anything pretty emo would work. keep writing, your good.
That Was Reaally Good
I Loved It;]
ilove it , its sooo beautiful and tragic… AMAZING
nice
luved it
thats awesome…i can relate to that like so much…how bout this…
a cut too deep
impossible to weep
i called your name
you never came
did you not hear
or did you just fear
what you’d find
my twisted mind
if you never live
you never die
well that’s what i thought,
until…
thats by me btw xox
who is emma? “ang babaeng emo?’”
Wow…..so deep………I can relate.
I am new to this ‘emo’ thing…any tips? I listen to Three Days Grace, AFI, and Killswitch Engage. Are any of those ‘Emo’ bands?
dude … thats so …. deja view for me }; }; nice poem..
wow this is so touching i lov it
and jess i lv urs to
wow guys
thanx for the comments im glad you enjoyed it!
i was thinking of putting some of my other poems on here
if you want to add me on myspace its: http://www.myspace.com/lifeznotfair
anyways thanx heaps
luv emma xx
i really liked it. you know, it makes you (me atleast) relize life is nothing and everything without others. i wish i could write poems like that.
i have one about smoking, like not smoking, because i dont smoke and dont plan to. if you smoke, whatever. just tell me if you like it plz.
smoking can make you die
id rather have the razor in my eye
than die
because this lie
some think its cool
to smoke it at school
some smoke it everyday
their life slowly rotting away
also,
the first time i got called emo
was so long ago
i asked what it ment
while playin` with a lego
i found out the answer
and cryed about it so
and started cutting my self
when i got called emo
well this is what i thought of your poems
JESS: your poem was good but it didnt realy have an ending like you could end it there or add more to it and like i said its a good poem! =D
OME~~EMO~~:,-/: the first poem was realy good and i enjoyed it but the second one is very steriotypish (lol i just made that word up XD) and it could offend some people so you have to be careful about what you write……but its good besides =D
well this is what i thought of your poems
JESS: your poem was good but it didnt realy have an ending like you could end it there or add more to it and like i said its a good poem! =D
OME~~EMO~~:,-/: the first poem was realy good and i enjoyed it but the second one is very steriotypish (lol i just made that word up XD) and it could offend some people so you have to be careful about what you write……but its good besides =D
I loved the peom it gives a great rift in the meaning for this school and how people treat each other. i mean everyone knows you but they just dont now your name so they call me other names like bitch, how, slut, or emo basterd. its good to know that people know me for what i stand for and who i am. that is a great influence to know that it is great to know who you are but not to know ur name so this way they can call you what ever they want to!!! Thanks emma for that. That really helped me to know that im not the only one.
I hate to know who you are
i hate to know what youve become
i hate to know that i luv you dearly
although i threatned to kill myself over that shit you did to me
i cut myself so many times
ive stabbed myself but didnt die
ive done so much shit becuz of you
im just tired of doing it
im so emo that its not even funny
i get bitched at becuz i changed for you
you dont understand that i would die for you
but youve done did shit that its not funny
i try to cry but nuthing comes out
i try to cut but im running out
i try to die but nothing happens
so when i think of you
i think im gonna be sick
i cut myself and i try to kill myself
but you will never understand
what i feel i will always feel
no matter what i do to myself
i hate the way you treat me and the way you look
i hate that i changed for you just for becuz
if you know that im talking about you
all you have to do is go and fuck your bitchy, skanky, ugly azz gurl friend becuz im through!!!!
i hope this helps out somewhat to what you were talking about but idk cus i really dont care!! Thanks Emma!!! if you feel the same way im happy cuz i know that im not the only one but hey if i dont have guys than i know for damb sure that i have gurlz!!!
I hate to know who you are
i hate to know what youve become
i hate to know that i luv you dearly
although i threatned to kill myself over that shit you did to me
i cut myself so many times
ive stabbed myself but didnt die
ive done so much shit becuz of you
im just tired of doing it
im so emo that its not even funny
i get bitched at becuz i changed for you
you dont understand that i would die for you
but youve done did shit that not funny
i try to cry but nuthing comes out
i try to cut but im running out
i try to die but nothing happens
so when i think of you
i think im gonna be sick
i cut myself and i try to kill myself
but you will never understand
what i feel i will always feel
no matter what i do to myself
i hate the way you treat me and the way you look
i hate that i changed for you just for becuz
if you know that im talking about you
all you have to do is go and fuck your bitchy, skanky, ugly azz gurl friend becuz im through!!!!
all nice poems. i cnt rly write poems. well, i tried. and they didnt turn out as gud as i wanted. skrock.
btw, i no a grl at my skool named emma. just saying.
i love it! it reminds me of someone i love…but he dosnt kno…
I loved it , the peom is perfect
very good
thanks peoples!!! i hope that one of these days everyone could be just like us and help others out in need. i love to know that i can encourage people like yourselves to believe in one another and help out and encourage you to express your feelings. all you have to do is think but right it down on paper. it doesnt matter whether or not it rhymes or if it dont. just right your feelings and that will be the best peom in the whole world. just rmember to right it down and it doesnt have to rhyme but it will be a peom because it is about your feelings and if or when you are emo or goth, it really dont matter whether or not it rhymes. just keep that in mind okay and its great to write about your feelings!!!
if you like someone tell that person how you feel even if he or she rejects you it shouldnt matter because you have told your feelings and it would be sooooo much easier okay it would be like getting bolders off of your shoulders!!!!! Trust me i know that feeling. Im in love with someone who is in the hospital because he has 3 degree burns from a fire on February 25th. Okey so just let it out and tell that person even if ou doesnt want to know. Okey!!!! Dont be afraid to tell someone your feelings because if you wait to long it will be to late!!!!! TRUST ME!!!!! its just like whats happening to me right know okey!!!! Just keep that in mind
i love the way you smell but i hate the way you are
i love the way you treat me but i hate the one you love
you say that you love me but i dont think that you do
you say that you want to be with me but fuck you!!!!
i hate that your always there in my mind aand reality
i hate that i have to see you go with a skanky little bitch who hates you any ways
my friends say that im too good for you and that i deserve better
but right know im not gonna leave because you need me the most
im wanting to die so bad but i really cant
if i do die than all i will see is you in my mind
im always lonely and sad but then i see you
and you always help me out like my gardian angel
you saved me from making a mistake that i would have regreated
and i am very thankful for what you do for me
when i was beat up for what my ex has done you protected me from him just like my friend emma did
they wanted to kill him because of the brusies
but all the brusies that i have know are the ones from which you hurt me
i cant stand how you dated a skanky bitch like her
but she should be in the hospital and not you
i hope that you understand that my feelings for you will never change
but i cant keep goign on like this with all of this stress
i am not getting enough sleep and im not eating good and im also loosing hair but im doing this because i love you and that would not change.
i think you for opening my heart and my eyes because i didnt think that would ever happen agian but you showed me that its okey to love agian but its not okey to be afraid. Im glad that i know you but i cant keep living like this
my parents want o kill me because your black and im white i can care less to what my parents have to say but when they threaten to kill me because i like you there is a problem there. im gonna stop writing know because i could write forever but you need to know that i will always love you through thik and thin!!!!!
whoa, thats a long poem. prety gud. a bit vague tho. like at the begining u were angry at the person and at the end ur saying that u “will always lov u thru thik and thin”. just a comment.
I appreciate this site in the sense that Emo’s can confide and share their feelings…..
HOWEVER, it is such depressing, self-pittying Bull Shit that is only going to leave you feeling miserable, suicidal and anxious.
Emo - to me - after reading these poems - means death - because it all leads to death.
This will most probably not make it in the reply section but in the off chance that it does, I really hope and pray that some of the “Emo’s” will stop play-acting and following like robots and sheep and break away - be secure, independent with your own ideas and
find SOLUTIONS to your problems so that you dont wallow in this self-pitying Bull Shit.
Im sorry to offend anyone on this site - but this is my opinion and I dont think that Emo pop culture has anything valuable to add to your life in making you the best, most individual person you were born to be.
So quit the hair dye, the studs in the mouth, the black deathly costumes that conceal who you really are, the inferiority complex, the pouting, the mumbling, groaning and playing the weak, wimpy victim. Be strong. Be different and break away.
oh ok!!! im soooo srry that you feel that way because that is not all that we stand for. we all do different things for emo and we believe in different things. This might not be the sight for you because i mean we share our feeling for people and everything so all i got to say is if this is not you than stay off because we do what we wnat to do. We feel differnetly than everyone eelse does and im srry but if you cant understand stay off this site!!! Thanks for the complement on the peom!! i know that i was like really mad at the beginning but then you get so angry that you just go for it but then you feel bad and say your srry and then start talking good about it!!!! idk why but thats just how it is on my feelings!!!! But thanks and i know this is a depressing state that people are in but we call our selves emo and thats what we are going to be and yes it is deppressing but hey thats us and if you dont like it stay of this sight!!!!
srry but we are not going to change just because you want us too!!!!! get over it. just becuz we are not like you dont mean nuttin!!!!!!!! SRRY BUT IT DOESNT!!!!!!!!
i know they doesn’t really macth but i wanted a public review of them
On valentines day I saw you walk away/on Halloween I saw you bleed/on Christmas I saw you die/ /on valentines day I walked to your grave/Tonight I shall truly cry /as the blade slices my skin and the blood wells up/But it doesn’t matter because I’ll cut to deep/ on the day of true of true pain/ I am out of my fucking mind/and the day of true pain is here
We see the leaves in the gutter/ we see them floating on the pond/ if half of every leaf we ever saw was an act of love this world be a different place/ and if every other half of a leaf was an act of hate we would drown in our misery/all these leaves without a care in the world living as free as the wind/ then a tyrant comes along and puts them all in a cage/ we stand and watch as they wilt and wither/ if every withered leaf was a person we would be the lonely ones/ life may be better it may be worst/ we won’t know till we try/ We see the leaves in the gutter/ we see them floating on the pond/ these are the ones drowning in true happiness and beauty as they sink to the bottom/
ok people
seriously stop calling yourselves emo
emo is a type of music and poems
its not a style!
plus to soar like an eagle the poems are depressing because they make us feel good. that there are worse things happening out there.
im sick of steriotyping do i look like a cd to you?
haha
great poems ppl
this poem should be published in more places so that people can know
you guys are so good at writing poems that are like so close to my life its like yall are me.
dont you guys feel like sometimes your parents support you but dont really understand you thats hoe my parents are i kinda hate that wouldnt you???
I am here with a nife in my hand and a gun in the other and its all because of a u why cant i forget you once and for all this is what love is makeing me do why does love have to be this way for me and all the tears are gone from crying about you and for you my eyes are dry u did this to me u are the one that is makeing me do this way cant i just cut myself and get it over with idont know what to do i am lost in this world.
can you guys please comment my poems even if you think its bad i need to know t improve
Thnks
You hurt me so much
but why do i still feel so in love
you made me cry for the first time in years
but made me smile again
i gave you my heart what a mistake!
you hurt it over and over again
but i never told you how i felt
but any time i made a mistake you made me cry again
i always forgave you
i was so stupid to do that
how could i have loved you
you are the reasons for my scares on my arms
becuz of you i can never show my arms again
i cry myself to sleep at night cuz you almost died becuz of me
but then i almost died cuz of you
so now i sing this pointless song with friends all around
but they dont know what goes on in this broken mind
so yet you may be here with me am still alone fighting this war inside my head
dont think i’ll ever win but i keep on fighting
people star and wonder why am like the way i am well am not going to change for them but them you are the ones who changed me to be this thing that you all hate!
so now i cry but my tears stopped falling
so now i cut but blood dont come
so now i try to OD but it never seems to work
so it just seems like am empty and cold inside with nothing left
cuz you took what was most important to me
you took my heart and lost it so i could never get it back
OK i know am a random person to this site but i read most of the poems on here and they where great i can really understand what they ment and they made me feel better in knowing am not the only one with them feelings
i came up with that poem there now and well am talking about my ex in it so yeah
i dont think i will get any replys about this i hope i do thow
and i hope you didnt mind me putting up my own poem
well reply if you like and tell me what you think well later now
xXSummerXx
okey guys the peoms are great yall are like proffesionals and everything!!!! keep up the good work because you could be the head of the emo world when no one thinks that the emo people are still alive!!! lets keep it up with the world that just because we are emo dont mean nuttin but the world can be coming to an end and we will be the only ones who can help people to themselves agian but yeah just keep up the good work okey and when time comes yall can be the next emo peom writers!!!!
i love you so dearly, but i hate the way you are, i hate of whom you have become, i try my hardest to impress you, but i dont think you understand, i try my hardest, and i have changed so much for you, but i dont think that you really care for me, i sit in the dark and look up for who i have become and think what in the world did i get my self into? i try and i try but you just dont understand that what i do i do for you, i cut and bleed and i rip my vain, but there is no way that i can die because i love you truely, i try and i try to keep you up and when you are hurting or when your high, i am always there to make sure you dont die or fall on me, i might not pay attention but it doesnt mean that i dont care and i keep my hand behind your back because i know that its the right thing to do i try and i try but it just doesnt work so the next time that you think that you own me take another wild guess, you sit there and make out with me and you fuck me but when it comes to date me, you turn the other cheek, you say that you loved me since we met but you dont dhow it so next time you think i will wait for you, your wrong because im not gonna wait and everything, i say that i love you and its the truth but i cant keep waiting for you but i will wait untill i die, i love you forever and always
well, i like the poem cuz i feel that its just how i feel right now…
while you see me cry
you laugh said say who cares
i see my heart sink deeper into the darkness
you laugh and walk away
you make me see the true meaning in life
you make me see that you are not the one
see me cry, see me die
you know what you did
you know what u will do
the next time you say hi
~emodream~ ~moonbrat_Wickedladie~ Ana
NOT SO EMO
you want to be emo to inpress some one but that person does not want you to be emo. A boy named richard want to be emo for his girl friend but i dont want tyou to be says laynie i need you to be normal not like me i am a emo girl just like other girls i cut myself to death. its not fum being me i am a ugly little emo girl that wants to be just like you. but i cant be i am a little girl but the person inside of me wants to be normal just like you a little girl like you.
i am 13 years old i want to die a knife in my hand its not enough to kil me theres is someone in my life i want to live for. your so sweet to me. evry time i grt mad or sad i want to cut ti want to kill myself its not enough to die there is nothing to live for EXSEPT one person i love its you richad if you broke my heart i would die.
hey peoples yall seriously need to get over yourselves. we are here for poems and to tell what we think not to smooch and everything. i can see that yall love each other but dang on get a room please i seriously well and alot of people seroiusly dont want to here that unless you put it in words that you think could be a poem ok other than that i hope that yall grow old together and have kids and such okey
write it down for a poem
oh yeah and i know what you are going through to change for a loved one because i have and i get bitched at everytime i walk in the door… so keep in mind if you love someone dont change because they might not like you period or they might like you the way you are and not who you hink you need to be for them okey ppls so just sit down and talk about it and figure out what yall want to do okey!!!
thanks for listnening
take it from someone whose been there and done that okey its not worth changing your style or the way you act for someone. if they wnt to to change than they really dont like you the way that you think they like you okey
KEEP THAT IN MIND KK!!!!!!!!
amy,
noones here to be put down ok
you need to get over yourself if your too immature to read some of these poems go somewhere else
play nice plz
-emma
I stand infront of the mirror wondering who this girl is standing right infront of me
where my heart is feels so cold
i dont think anything is there anymore
its hard to care when your eyes are uncaring
but its hard to let go when you want to care
i walk down the street trying to smile
just so people dont ask if am ok
i lie to myself every day i say “am ok” but am far from
my hair in my eye always looking down just so i cant see the faces of the ones who are killing me
feeling so alone but pushing people away
just so scared to be hurt again
going to sleep and not wanting to wake up…
walking to school every day just to know what is going to be said behind my back
at brake and lunch i sit alone in a corner where no one is around
i put my hand into my poket and there in my hand is a razor
thinking what i should do singing to myself
so low only i can hear my sad and lonly song
people walk passed and yet they still dont see me
so i put the razor to my arm and i dont even feel it i just see the blood i laugh cause i think am dead wondering if am living in a nightmare
and then for once some one asked if am ok
and all i said is “that am fine”
ok thats a random poem not to sure what am talking about here am in skool right now so maybe thats why its about skool and ders a razor in my poket so i think thats where that came from so yeah and i say fine cuz it stands for somthing but i will tell u another time cuz i have to go to class bye bye
hey emma
im not bringing anyone down im trying to encourage people to write peoms and not to be so lovey dubby all the time
not trying to bring anyone down either
im more mature than most people my age so yeah
but ne ways
hi my name is Angel and dis poem should be in different places so other people could see how we all feel…
but here is my poem
everyone in my school calls me names
but want me to change the way i am
but im not going to
cuz i am who i am and they cannt change the fact that im like dis…so they cant go and leave me alone and let me be who i want to be not who they want me to be…
nicee. liek it cause thats wuts sorta happening to me. wel, sorta. i just turned emo a few months ago, and jack’s liek wut the fuck, change back u faggot. so yea. 0.0
Hey i wrote this poem.I now its not that good!But i tried really hard.Its called what u did to her.
She sits there crying.
Wishing she was dying.
She puts the razor to her wrist.
Nowing why shes doing this.
But do u its all because of u.
U broke her heart.
So what if she dies.
There is nothing to live for.
You did it once u did it twice.
Now u cant do it again.
Arnt u happy than?
these are some really good poems…thats really great…you know that all of yall could be profesionals one of these days…well, i also wrote a peom…its not the first time i wrote one but i guess… my other ones are at the top if you havent already seen them but instead of the emo angel name it is amy…well, here i go…
i hate it that you are like that…i hate it that i cry over that…you think that i dont care…so you call me bitch from hell….i try not to want to kill myself…i try my hardest to care for you…when it comes to ppl talking about you…i get pisser than a mule on the edge of a cliff…i try and i try…but i guess its not working…cuz if it did…you wouldnt do this to me…you say that you love me…then we fuck…then you drop out of school…and you get lite on fire…i hate that i cry…i hate that i get a knife…and i just cut myself…you all call me names but i dont give a fuck…because one of these days…i just wont show up…then your gonna be like….what the hell…news come on that i killed myself…you regret doing what you do….but you did it anyways..know im in the mist of losing you and of loosing a really good friend…she took some pills…know she needs a liver…i offered but i can die too…she did that because of you…i try and i try…but it doesnt work…but all i know…im glad that i can be known as the bitch from hell….even though i did kill myself…i will be well known…i hope that i could be talked about…as if i was there…even though i still try….but i wont die unless you do…i try and i try….but i guess its just not working…i need help…but its not working….so when i go to cut myself tonite…i guess i will think of you….if you read this know then you know that i hate myself….for when you were single…we could have been a thing…then we ended up fucking…and you just do that…i really see how important i am…even though you dont show it…so next time think…before you act…because next time you need to fuck…. i might not be here for you to do that…
i dont know what to call this peom…but i guess you all could give me suggestions if you would like…i mean i just dont have a talent to give it names…
i wish i was dead,
i wish i was in bed,
the razors so deep,
i can see my feet,
i love you so much,
just like im dutch,
i have a fringe over my eye,
so i will cry,
LOL
i love emos
they make me smile
im a Wemo innit.
chloe made me do it.
xxx
add me y’all (y)
hey nice peom…i like it….it is really good…. you could be a profesional if you wanted to….it makes me feel like i want that to happen to me….awsome…
w0w nice poem luv it so mUcH….iT r3mInDz Me Of SoMeOnE
prettyfull
hey….how is everyone….well here is a peom…
you say you love me….so yhou call me names….i hate that you lie to me….so you say things you dont mean….you say that you hate her….but your still with her….and you are always talking like…..you dont even care…i try and i try…..but whatever i do is not good enough for you….so you call me names….like its a bad thing….you say and say….but i really dont care….that you say that you love me….but your talking to me best friend…your still going out with me enemy….i hate it so…so next time you look at me….i will be so different….i hate all the things you do….but you ay so yourself….you say that you love me….then you call me names….at least you know me by something….than by nothing…but then you say all the things that you do….so all i got to say is you call me names….like its a bad thing….i will always have feelings…but i cant do this when you are with me enemy….so call me names all you want….but just dont talk to me anymore….srrry….call me names cuz i really dont care….i dare you to try to do something else to hurt me….i slit and i moan…i slit some more….but i guess what ever i do….im just not good enough for you…i changed and i slit…but i guess it dont matter…you say your gonna break up with her….but hey….still hasnt happened….im still waiting….but nothings happening…..so i guess i can move on….and change back to me normal self….
hey…i dont know how else to put this….but this is acually happening to me right know and it suxxs big time….so if yall can think of a name for this peom…let me know….cuz i dont know what else to call it…i hope you all like this peom… thanks….
well it rains and pours,
wen ur out on ur own,
if i crash on the couch,
can i sleep in my clothes?,
cause i spent the nigth dancing,
im drunk i suppose,
if it looks like im laughing,
im realy just asking to leave
hey peeps, im new and i have just moved to a new town recently, and i love listening to, linken park, fall out boy (pete wentz is so hot!) and my chemical romance, i just died my hair black and hot pink(it looks so hot right now) cause i have it spiked up and im loveing these poems man, they are awsome, and i love this website any was hit me back, just a chat, this is your biggest fan, chuky chan………. im female to if ur wondering
p.s that poem was from my chemical romance
hey nice….welcome to the site…..
when you say that you hate her but then you fuck her….when you say that you love me…but you dont fuck me….you say all these things and its pissin me off…so next time you say something….make sure its true and not a lie…..you told my sister that we are dating…but your dating someone else…..just take a look at what youve done….and just keep it to your self…know everyone thinks were dating….and its pissing me off…..event though i love you alot….i just cant stand lieing…. so next time you say that you love me….get it right….cuz i dont think you love me….all you want is just a fuck buddy….i cant stand the way you treat me….and i hate the way you talk to me…but hey wut ever you say is fine with me….so just keep that in mind cuz im through with your ass….cuz im just so tired of feeling the way that i do….
This poem is awesome it makes me see how much you need people
you rock emma!!!
love ya poem
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love it emma
cya xx
“Woe to you, Oh Earth and Sea, for the Devil sends the beast with wrath, because he knows time is short…
Let he who hath understanding reckon the number of the beast for it is a human number, its number is Six hundred and sixty six.”
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btw that was from Iron Maiden
NiCe p0eM PeopLes. .
Heres miNe. .
I wr0te u a p0em,
I wr0te in oN My wrist. .
I wr0te it with a raz0r bLadE. .
It eNdEd wit a twist. .
The bladE Was sharP And narRow,
I do it to kiL The pain. .
I finish my firSt sentence..
And then i siLt a Vein. .
I saW My p0em..
RunNing d0wn. .
ON The floOr..
I saw bloOd..
And i saw n0 m0re..
Well,wht do u thnk?
My world is an hourglass. The you pour the sand faster so you don’t have to see me anymore. Once the sand is out, you leave it, so the glass shatters, like my heart.
who knows what we feel
if we are numb
our lives they steal
with their reform
and mixes
that leave us in dark
things that shoke us
even steal our hearts
why must you make us cry ourselves to sleep
why must we die
with knives that go in deep
to our souls
ast flesh
that spews out blood
things that force
our crimson flood
ii LOVE DhiiZs POEM A LOT iii REALLii RELATES TO…Liike ii FEEL Liike NO BODY CAREzS ABOUT Mii
that kindda hurts!!
wow
shyttt yall niqqas are deep;
like fsho’ yall make me
/qet teary eyeddd;
hey this is sooooooooo gooood i jus
Aww you guys are amazing! I love you guys! And your poems!
3mm. This is called My sunshine goes down today…. Ok. As you take my heart you take my pride. Because of you I should just die. Why do you want me to commit suicide? When we all know it was true love inside. You messed with my mind for the last time.now its time to say my goodbyes and lay down and die… Well its not good but I tryed!
ang cucute, puede pa bang magrequest….
thanks, next pagvisit ko pouh ulit ha,….
I am so pissed off i submited this poem to a difrent website how dare you read it and call it your own you ass whole if you lived neer me i would kick your fing ass!!!!!
Here is another one of my poems not a great one
Best day ever
today is a day of happiness,
it was perfect.
I was cheated on,
Back stabed,
But it was great.
Do you know why?
becuse i died…..
i think all ur poems rock and i hope you guys write more i like them heaps
have you heard this poem before:
my name is sarah i am but three my eyes are swallon i cannot see
the house is dark my folks arnt home
when mommy does come i’ll try and be nice
maybe i wont get one whipping tonight
dont make a sound i just heard a car my daddy is back from charlies bar
i here curse my name he calls a press myslf against the wall
i try to hide from his evil eyes
i am so afriaid now i am starting to cry
he finds me weeping he shouts ugly words he says its my fault that he suffers at work
he hits me and shouts and yells at me more
while i get free and i run to the door
his already locked and i start to ball
he picked me up and threw me agianst the hard weall
i fall to the fall with my bones nearly broken my daddy conitunes
with more bad words spoken
i am sorry i scream cause its much to late
his face has been twisted into unamaginable hate
the hurt in the pain again and agian
oh please god have mercy
he finally stops and heads to the door
while i lay there motionless sprawled on the floor
my name is sarah i am but three tonight my daddy murdered me!
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i loved it i can relate……heres my poem FEEL IT’S PAIN:
snapyour neck
snap your knees
brake your bones until you bleed
rip your skin
feel the pain
then do it all over again
sitalone and feel no harm
cut in deep and get 37 stiches in your harm
you get heartbroken
you feel down and sad
you smash holes in the walls cause your mad
you pass out drunk
you lay down for days and never get up and you feel the pian
now your body has cuts and your body hurts
now thats what i call pain so dont ever start
yeh emma? luved ur nameless emo poem! it was deep. i liked it. it was very gud. =P
emo girls are the hottest imo but any girl on webcam is just sexy