Emo Poem: Graceful Goodbyes
November 4th 2008 by nuk in emo poemsDancing, dancing, twirling around
Hand in hand, they fall to the ground
He turns her around to know she’s breathing no more
This feels like an open bleeding sore
He holds his breath and fights back tears
He’s still in the place where it confirmed his fears
She doesn’t know how this happened
She doesn’t know how this came to be
Her lover is in pain
She’s in agony
He’s getting tired of living
But it’s only the beginning
He takes the gun, some bullets too
And shot his head all the way through
Sparkling tears in her eyes, she holds out her hand
She’s come to take him from this land
He grabs it lovingly, full of surprise
Here begins her beloved demise
Hand in hand they walk away,
Their spirits linger till this day
Remember their love, remember their pain
For only from them will our love gain.
~~By Nicole~~
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sad and happy,…..i like it
hey this is rele good i love this poem!
“Their spirits linger till this day”
loved this part
really qood poem ;
happy &_+ sad ;
love it
i like bleed my hand..
bcoz of luv
man are you guys depressing
this is really good. :]
i liked it alot.
..w0w thats was c0ol,n0w i kn0w h0w t0 say t0 my ex that i really love him,
OMFG I got into the third line and I already had butterflies in my stomach, that poem realy touched my heart, you hav real tallent never let that tallent die xoxxoox
omg…by the 3rd line i was crying..it realy touched my heart..i loved it so much. and i kno exactly wut ur talkin about. ur mesage shined through the words and it was like a motion pic in my head as i was reading..and for all u emo haters out there…screw urself..if u dotn like it..plz dont read it..
keep writin ..i wana hear more from u
love always,
bleedin-angel
LOVE this peom. i loved every min readin it this is my fav peom ever