Emo Poem: Suicide girl
November 4th 2008 by nuk in emo poemsThey told me school was the best days of our lives
but too me it was like getting hit by a thousand sharp knives
i dont understand why people shout things so unkind
then i need a week to recover and unwind
but then one day everything went down hill
i got butterflies in my stomach i saw the dream i had to forfill
but this dream had no happy ending
i wrote my mum the text message and started sending
within this text message were a few harsh things
but it finished by saying i was now an angel up above id finally grown wings
as i sat in the woods my heart started too race
and the salty tears started to stream down my face
i tied the rope round my kneck so thick and tight
jumped off the tree with all my might
as i dangled in the air all pale and weak
my mum was ringing the police for any help she could seak
when the search party found me i was now breathless and cold
they rang up my parents the devastating news was then told
my mum hit the floor whilst crying out her heart
she looked at my foo from earlier my bitten jam tart
she frowned in despare as i was no longer there
but under that frown a small smile appeared
she new i was now in a better place but why i did it was the reason she most feared !
by Rachel Burridge
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… you left me breathles and astonished… I totally understand what you meant
i feel your pain i have to go through it every day…you made me shed a tear =’[
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omg…. im like totally astonished… i loved ur poem!!!!! i totally know how u feel!! omg im going to cry =(
suicide is good. it makes your soul t peace. ;c
i want to commit it
tonight…”
suicide is good. it makes your soul at peace. ;c
i want to commit it
tonight…”
Love the poem
Ive been there
Ive been through
In other ways
In other days
In goods
In bads
Ive been there..
LOve de Poem
For me its diferent..
They told me that love is the best..
but as love can be good it also..
Hurts..
Kills..
makes fun of ya..
laugh at you..
and eventually.. destroyes you
I found love
I thought it was perfect
but no, it was not..
(They told me that love is the best..)
heyyahh everyone i wrote dis poem oii! dunt commit suicide plzzz rele dunt ive been there dunt hurt yasen theres too much too live for xxxx thnx for comments lurv yooh all xx
ur poem is so true, it rlly touched me , u made tears roll down my face, i go through this, i want to commit suicide like in ur poem, i want to stop suffering and want my life to come to an end and i want my soul to stop feeling alone, I WANT TO DIE *TEARS*…im seriously crying right now, well i loved ur poem, u r a rlly good writer
omq ;
your poem is exactlly what i feel ;
its like an everyday thinq .
you qot me in tears …
your such a qood writer ;
keep it up.
wow…thats all im gonna say.
im speechless
that was great…i felt it too deep within me..=[
nice job, way to inspire people to greatness
i am there right now i want to die i feel like i have nothing to live for except my amazing encouranging boyfriend but when i cut myself it releases all my pain so i do it more or just get drunk
i think you need to seriously, get slapped in the face with reality. instead of wallowing around and being all depressed, snap out of it. it’s life and that’s how it is. it’s not always going to be like that. get overitt EMOOOOOO LOSERSS@@!!!
exscuse me PPL LIKE YUU TURN HAPPI PEOPLE INTO DEPRESSED PPL!! if ppl like yuu didnt bully ppl just becoz they liek diff things to yuu we wudnt be like tht yuu need a slapp in face to stop treating ppl like shit soo i suggest yuu dunt like our poems dunt luk at thm oh and by the way sort ya life out n do it quick theres not room in this wurld for ppl like yuu!! cyahhz
It’s a great poem.I felt it into the deep of my heart.And you people,who post this anti-emo comments…You should be ashamed!You judge us so unfair…You make us think like this….This is who we are,and if you don’t like it,then ignore…And,again,I love this poem!!!
good poem
shame about the line
“she looked at my food from earlier my bitten jam tart”
apart from that it is cool
you need to take some time out to check your spelling and grammer
i like it and i also know how you feel i go through it everyday
Hey i dont think i shud be writing here cos im a guy but i really liked your poem.i go thu hell each and everyday and i know wat its like.
keep writing
great poem. you do very well on sparking ppls inner emotions. AND ALL YOU FUCKING EMO HATERS NEED TO SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!!!!!!!
easy!
there will be tomorrow !.
only god knows!.
that wuz kewleo
omg i kno wuht u mean ughhh i have 2 go thru dhis sumtimes
nice job expressing ur self
This poem is amazing dont get me wrong, i wouldn’t class myself as emo.. but the way you talk & describe how you feel.. I’ve been there ya know.. at that stage when thing’s are hard.. every poem i have read on here as took my breath away more than once. This is truly amazing. I love writting poem’s.. although they do scare my mom a little.. what you people write inspires me.. & well i know i’ve spoken far to much then i should have lol.. but thank youu!
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WOW i love this poem it is one of my fav. i love the emotion in it. my friends think it is weird but STUFF THEM they just dont know a good peom when they see it.
hey whats up i need a friend to talk to so i was wonderin if i can make a friend on here
oh btw on redneck games on comedy central shel is a slut
that is a kool poem that is exactly how i feel
If yuu wanna talk wivv me and make friends this is my poem and my msn addie is paramore4eva@live.com Thanks
Lots of lurrv Rach
xXx
i luv ur poem ! ! ! ! ! i can totalli realate. i want 2 commit suicide so much. i want 2 do it 2night. butt instead i will cutt miself till i stop bleedin ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ( FUK ALL DA EMO HATERZ. I LUV ALL MI EMO PPL ! ! ! ! ! )
the first time i read this poem i started to cry. i dont want to live anymore…
touching it sounds alot like my life
i started to cry after reading that
you ppl really need to jus get slaped
you pullin your self down take a good look at life and relize whats good in it you guys take every thing so fucken serious