Emo Poem: Heartbroken

January 12th 2009 by nuk in emo poems

When you both pattionatly kiss
Its something nothing in this world could perswade you to miss
When his lips touch yours soo soft and gentle
You realise without him you’d go phisically mental
When he holds your hand, you can feel his warmth inside you
You want to be with him foreva like a package you would always come as two
You love to lay ontop of him just to hear his heart beat
And you get that special feeling hes the best you will ever meet
Then a new girl moves to your school
You’ve watched him check her out you’ve watched him druel
You decide to warn her away make her back off
She looks at you gone out, smiles then walks off
It’s the night of the prom he never turns up
You decide to set off alone,he loves you dont give up
Hes stood at the back of the room stood with her
Hes gently stroking her like he did with you , softly stroking her like fur
You just stand and watch for a moment , so speechless and still
He was the only one who knew you had an empty space the one that he could only fill
Then a tear slowly trickled down your face
He finally saw you and walked overin an even slower pace
He said it was over , you tried your best to smile
As in the background she waslaughing meanwhile
You turned in despare and walked towards the back door
You looked back hoping he’d followed you, but he was there no more

By Rachel x

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5 Responses to “Emo Poem: Heartbroken”


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    briana brootal

    peter is a boy…kinda weird and has a face not a good one…peter likes his friends…they are nice

  2. Lucy Zamboo

    hey!!! i know peter!!!! peter chanthura?
    i met him!! yeah!! he dose have friends!! nice ones too! im his girlfriend!!! we hang out every week!! wow !!! yeah ehes kinda weird and he had anal sax with baily plant i heard?! if thats the peter you are talking aboyt write back…

    LuCy_zAmBoO

  3. xXMCR LUVER!!Xx

    OMG!!! that poem waz soooo beautiful it made me cry ;_;!!!!
    u r a great writer keep it up and u know that ppl here will always incourage and luvv ur poetry cuz its soooo efin awesome!!!
    well thanx 4 writeing this poem!!!
    w/ <3 xXvickyXx

  4. XxXjeremy morrow aka emoloverXxX

    one day this couple where driving from a movie when the girl says pull over and she says ‘its over can we still be friends?’ He starts to cry as a silent tear comes down his cheek and he starts to drive again and a truck hit there car and the guy dies and the girl realized the note he left in here pocket she took it out and read it it said ‘without u i will die’ she started to cry as she thought of the note.

  5. briana brootal

    yeah that peter. hes kinda fat? haha yeah.
    it is him. and jeremy are you like emo or something cuz your name has like…alota xxxxx and are you single? haha or hot?

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