Is this a good emo poem i wrote?
March 4th 2009 by nuk in emo poems
i got really depressed one day so i wrote this poem out of nowhere and luckily, it got published too!! i had my days >,>
My Secret Shadow:::::
Feels like the world is split into two;
Everything that’s happening is light and dark.
In the day I conceal myself with a mask,
Hoping to be seen among others.
To be noticed just to not be alone,
My second face shows no sadness.
A face showing no emotions
Only a smile to show the world.
The eye sees that I am ordinary.
But when the sun begins to fade,
I return to where I belong while
There is little daylight left.
Darkness has finally set in,
A moon its only weakness.
My mask begins to fade
By the dimness of the closing minutes.
A tear drop of sadness,
Anger soon to take control.
I quickly turn on the lamp
To save my dying smile.
The stillness of the night triumphs
Until the dark is awakened by brightness.
Tonight, my only companion will be
My secret shadow.
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Ik voel het bloed druipen!
wow! geweldig! Hoe heb je met deze een soort van bloedige verbeelding. Gewoon blijven voeden uw talent. een groot dichter snel !!!!!!!!!!!!! 1
is awsome mensen ik borrow dit gedicht zal nemen om tot een lied te leiden, van u slechts ik zal uitoefenen singin het o.k. is?
Recht op kerel! Dat was diep.
That' vrij goed s, maar niets rijmen.
Dude .. haar soo cool. Zeer getalenteerde …. NICE!
ewwwwww zijn dus ….. emo ……… Emos are stupid cuz r ze willen kijken naar me dat ik er problemen zijn … o im depressief im gunna gesneden mijn zelfvertrouwen …. zij r idioten!
Omg!!! this is the coolest poem I’ve ever seen!!!
omfg!! this is one amazing poem! Its so deep that i can connect with it! So true btw most of us tend to pit on our mask’s to hide who we are but when darkness falls we cant help but to feel like ourselves cuz this is where we belong….<3
This is the most awsome poem and it is so true, i love it so much it is my all time favourite poem now.
its nice.
whenever im at school,
i used to write this kinds of stuff ..
i smile whenever someone smiles at me ..
i dont talk much ..
i ain’t got any to listen to me ..
but still, i smile ..
but after school, at my room ..
i start to think, why do i hafta to continue schooling if i dont have a friend there ?
theyre just depressing me ..
? having a mask??
it is needed
but voicingout youre feelingxz
is much better than
2 be a great pretender
being pretenter gives u
too much pain
mxz,razorblade wants 2 have a friend in friendster
xaionacuh_qixzcuh@yahoo.com
see yah there (//_T)
? having a mask??
it is needed
but voicingout youre feelingxz
is much better than
2 be a great pretender
being pretenter gives u
too much pain
mxz,razorblade wants 2 have a friend in friendster
xaionacuh_qixzcuh@yahoo.com
see yah there (//_T)
Amazing!!! I really love this piece
it says a lot and is brilliant!
i love it and the imagery was
fantastic,,, 9/10