Kick-a-poo or Lick-a-poo asked: this is the first poem i have written, i kno it’s kinda short but could people rate it on a 1-10 scale (keep in mind this is my first time) i’ve done this kinda stuff in skool but this is the first time i’ve done it on free will.-constructed critisim is [...]
My sweet & labyrinthine. asked: the problem w/ emo poems, is that they are so rub-it-in-your-face, exaggerated depressing that they sound totally fake. how do you write something that sounds REAL?? i.e. what elements would make it that way?
the scary thing is, you can still sound emo even if all of your words are sincere.Effects [...]
ibid asked: Got a dagger in my hand
As I pour through my horror page of thoughts
I can’t sleep
Through the darkest hours
Why can’t you accept
That my love is here with you?
Why can’t you feel
The same way?
The same way
But now its gone away
Its not over
I won’t be the one
To say surrender
Serenity.
Piece of mind.
They say that love
Is something [...]
Jkb11 asked: Okay, I’m really bored, so I am having an emo contest. You have to write the poem yourself, it does NOT have to rhyme, it has to be at least 4 LINES, and most of all, IT HAS TO SOUND EMO. Good luck! Here’s mine!
All I can see
Is a blanket of darkness surrounding [...]
[RnbwVNsBabee?] asked: i knew this day would come this current day, that is why I sound so gay.you murmur you love me and i begin to dissolve to our cryptic place.The music makes me shake, the devils are sinking straight along with you.That makes me think youre a sin.Deforestation
musikartguy05 asked: i got really depressed one day so i wrote this poem out of nowhere and luckily, it got published too!! i had my days >,>
My Secret Shadow:::::
Feels like the world is split into two;
Everything that’s happening is light and dark.
In the day I conceal myself with a mask,
Hoping to be seen among [...]
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