Rate my First Emo Poem? *it sucks* ?
March 11th 2009 by nuk in emo poems 15
Kick-a-poo or Lick-a-poo asked:
this is the first poem i have written, i kno it’s kinda short but could people rate it on a 1-10 scale (keep in mind this is my first time) i’ve done this kinda stuff in skool but this is the first time i’ve done it on free will.-constructed critisim is welcome
I look at you, you look at me
this is the first poem i have written, i kno it’s kinda short but could people rate it on a 1-10 scale (keep in mind this is my first time) i’ve done this kinda stuff in skool but this is the first time i’ve done it on free will.-constructed critisim is welcome
I look at you, you look at me
I hate how you pretend you can’t see
Our eyes meet for seconds, then drift away
Why should i love you if it’s that way?
Shadows
We don’t talk much, well not at all
I regret ever taking your calls
I don’t wanna see you any more
What am i suffering for?
I feel like a shadow in the night
Not knowing the difference between wrong and right
You talk with my friends, why not me?
Am i really that hard to see?
I feel like I’ve done something wrong
Why won’t you forgive after this long
Have I?
No. Shadows don’t forgive
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